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在大街上我们各个衣饰鲜亮,眉眼舒展,说那些成年人所不懂的事情,提着那些让他们陌生的辞藻。在这里我讲我的默契,我们的真挚,我们的痴情,我们的梦想和誓言。这里的天空如白衣少女的眸子般清澈明晰。它会让你重拾那或放纵不羁,或晶莹雪亮的梦的点滴……

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我做的一首十四行诗,欢迎点评!

窘
窘窘
2000-12-14 13:02
小他她啊,我今天晚上突发灵感写了这么个东东,一首变韵的十四行诗(呵呵,可能不太像诗)
也许不那么好,可是第一,它确实包含着我的真心;第二嘛,仔细看看,看你能发现什
么第三,这个就是我努力学习天天向上的证明啊!

By the first time I saw you
All my world had changed for you
Couldn't help falling for you
Kept my eyes staring at you
So many nights your voices expel my fears
True feelings bring down my tears
Really wanna love you forever
Even when the world is over
Everytime I see you smiling
The world of mine turns bright and shining
Baby you know I'll always be there
On and on my love stops never
You're the reason why I am alive
Shining like the stars guiding my life

——I love you with every beat of my heart!^-^

怎么样,发现了吗?把主要那一段的每句第一个字母串起来就是——
YES!就是B-A-C-K-S-T-R-E-E-T-B-O-Y-S!我们的最爱!


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listbox(客人)
2000-12-14 21:35
Cool!But so difficult!
窘
窘窘
2000-12-14 22:31
miss you !
hi ,my goodfriend ,itis a very nice to see you !
have you got my letter?
L
listbox(客人)
2000-12-15 00:07
Yes
Receive you letter a moment ago.So happy of you!
窘
窘窘
2000-12-15 00:36
great ,you are online ,
where are you ,
i want to chat with you!
小
小他她
2000-12-15 00:49
ni men gan ma ????
bie kan wo fa de shi pin yin yo !!!
ha ha ha ,wu di ba ~~~~~
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