Life is short an rushing by
Have you ever dreamed of being ordinary
The thought of forgetting
Why becomes of losing you?
The sighing of my heart is missing you
Winds blow as reflection of my life
Good fortunes I make it stay
To give you a home to play
Not only for a moment
But forever long
Now I pass through storms and tears
You make my life worthwhile
Standing by me can't release her
You inspire me to live on
Speak softly love from my trembling heart
Do you fell my tender words?
That colour my broken heart and shine
A moment that you come into my world
There's forever without her

好长，，，太长了，，你不要告诉我是你写的

西西

答案是否定的，，，我很怀疑，，

我E文真的烂到家了

现在？？没什么时间，，下次吧

因该多鼓励嘛~~~~~~别老打击我啊~~

不会真是你写得吧？

那，，就不是了

你怎么知道的啊！！！

你说呢？

那还不至于。。。只有用到脚指头而已

说这种话都不敢用真名还要匿名！！
居然还会follow me,嘿嘿。

The song was sung by Bryan adams,i fond of E music,especially like Bryan adams and backstreet boys^ song.But you poem^_^,i think,is not very good,because it is so empty.Maybe you can learn something from 亦洁^s poem--in spite of that the poem wasn^t written by him,it^s a poem better than you^s.If you want to throw something(like brick or tomoto)to me,you can call me,qq is 23077301.My name is lover---wahahahahahahahah(^_^)

能否也原创一首给我们看看，要是水平没有欧阳的那首高的话，最好还是别发表什么了：），虽然你也称赞欧阳的。嘿嘿。

很明显我写不出什么好诗来，我只懂得该如何去欣赏一首诗。我说佩儿写的诗还不是很好而已，因为缺少一点内容。这是我的个人看法——一首诗应该咏物言志或者通过别的什么来抒发自己的感情，单是一句爱，怕说明不了什么问题吧？我知道天下高手甚众，但楼上的高手也用不找这样吧，哈！