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不怕丢人——我的英语作文之一

珞
珞珈少主
2000-08-03 21:16
为了对付考试,现在开始每日一课(真是倒回去过了),练习250字左右的英文命题写作。我不怕丢人,贴出来向各位请教。无论是语法、结构、拼写还是立意、行文诸方面,均欢迎指正。大学六级英语通过者,更请不吝批评。

题目是一本PETS5复习指导用书规定的。

今天是第一篇

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Cinema or Video CD?

Go to cinema or buy a Video CD, especially in modern China, even to ordinary people like us, is a question. Artists said that the great scene, real sound and beautiful colors only on the film in cinema, VCD just a small and shutdown copy, there is no exciting enjoyment but simple reading. Going to cinema always likes joining a ceremony, presenting a striking contrast to this, staying at home and watching a small box, as they concluded, just like a fool potato died in chair.
However, most people prefer buying VCDs, whatever quality or piratic ones. There is only one reason: buying a VCD is cheaper than going to cinema. One quality VCD costs just several Yuan, nearly half of one ticket of that ceremony which artists take delight in talking about. Few money but more enjoyment, why we don’t choose such a way to have entertainment?
Maybe no people could negate that going to cinema is more exciting, but how about the cost? We must depend on the situation when we do everything. Anyway, entertainment is a only part but not the whole of life. A gift brought by scientific development such as Video CD, one thin disk, more convenient and cheaper thing, which you can take it to everywhere and enjoy it whenever, you have no reason to refuse it. The world might have becoming more and more busy, lonely and less interesting, like someone said, more depraved, but it is a fact in the face of us. Who can acclimatize himself to these changes, who can live with more sense.
Cinema or Video CD, in a sense, is exactly a question.
珞
珞珈少主
2000-08-04 07:33
承带子郎指出——
第四行之“likes”应作“like”,此处是prep.。
小
小眉眉
2000-08-04 08:20
我来提抗议
您就少在这儿用鸟语来刺激小眉眉了
又想到我的六级了-------------黯然神伤
小
小吝
2000-08-05 05:03
小眉眉,革命還未成功,大家一起努力.
带
带子郎
2000-08-05 05:28
谁不成功?
都成功了!
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